04 May 5 Step Formula to Create the Perfect Online Dating Profile – Step 5: Invitation to Connect
Closing sentence – Invitation to connect
This is your invitation for people to contact you. So make sure it is positive and inviting. I’ve seen some terrible closing sentences….
‘If you’re a bunny boiler then don’t bother contacting me, I’ve had enough of those.’
‘I don’t want any time wasters’
Sentences like this leave a bad taste in people’s mouths. It needs to be positive, up beat and inviting –
E.g.
‘If you like what you have read, please do get in touch and say hi, or send me a wink if you’re shy’
‘If you like what you have read, please do get in touch and say hi. I will always reply.’
Too many people’s emails get ignored so to mention that you will always reply (only if this is true) will appeal to women.
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Last hints/tips:
– Check meticulously for typos
– Don’t use ‘sms/text speak’ e.g lol, eva, 4,
– Always be truthful
– Never write anything negative – don’t say what you don’t want – only what you do want – no hints at negative emotional baggage
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